Tuesday, February 10, 2009

It might not......END.

Tuesday, February 10, 2009
We meet folks, forget them.
We make relations, they end.
Someone newfangled, fascinates;
but then comes out, the same..
A lot of those we find, cheering;
and so often, they fade.
Some sincere hardships
but somehow in vain.
Feelings....yes they were true
ended......they didn't have to
unseen....uncared
ruined by them
They were actually meant.

Amongst everything happening this way...

WE..
we rise again...
A bit more sturdy....
A thought more strong..
Reconciled..
A feather more added..
experienced......they say.

And then..
Again we meet
Again we make
Again we find..feel for them
Again we work hard..

Just a hope that..
this time....maybe
IT MIGHT NOT END.

11 comments:

uma shankar gupta said...

WELL PATA NAHI HOW U WRITE AND WHEN U WRITE BUT WHATEVER U WRITE IS GENUINE.
THIS TEXT ALSO DEPICTS YOUR GENUINE THOUGHTS BEHIND WRITING SUCH ARTICLES.
KEEP IT UP AND DO REMEMBER ME FOR ADDS

jain said...

quite endearing really enamoured by the meticulous metamorphosis of your sense perception into the english alphabets.

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Phoenix said...

Such stubbornness !! Its like you are trying to walk on ice bare foot.. u slip n fall.. u get up.. try to budge an inch.. u slip n fall again.. and the next time ur gettin up, u think 'may be this time i won't'.

I've found your previous ones pretty marvelous.. but this particular piece tells me.. that they were no goddamn fluke !
You ARE a writer ! Take that from someone who knows..

You rock !

chaitanya said...

thnks.....a lot

amit singh said...

oh my god...after i end ur readings,i start to feel as smthng went into my head which zingles it throught which results in nothing but only leaves my hair ruffles,as feathers of broken wings.....i dint able to find begin n end of ur thought or prception which u wants to clear,but it remain always fuzzy to me..

Adwitiya said...

well sometimes things need to end in order to begin....who knows your thoughts may give "end" a new definition.this very bent of mind towards 'un-de-construction" is definitely positive.

chaitanya said...

un-de-construction

that was the best appreciation i ever had...
thanks amrita

S said...

wow....
ur such a bundle of talent..
wow....:-)

Unknown said...

bhai it was awesome and i today undrstood this....as i m going thru d same state of mind...

continue expressing urself...

Unknown said...

bhai it was awesome and i today undrstood this....as i m going thru d same state of mind...

continue expressing urself...